szaleniec1000 May 15, 2013 23:57
show don't tell, i still ship percy/penelope, percy is evil, brave sir harry ran away, everyone is evil, a description would be nice, conflict be damned, luna is ooc, ron is evil, read pou instead, pov!fail, reading the books is a good idea, harry is an idiot, are you a witch or not, sexism, badfic:in this world and the next, mary sue and gary stu, you fail feminism forever, hermione in name only, disembodied dialogue, epithet overload, harry potter, idiot balls for everyone, dumbledore is evil, anticlimax
szaleniec1000 Sep 25, 2012 23:01
epic fail, brave sir harry ran away, everyone is evil, i now pronounce you a bunch of idiots, conflict be damned, hypocrisy, it's contrived excuse time!, informed wrongness, ron is evil, my argument is pastede on yay, reading the books is a good idea, harry is an idiot, sexism, metaphor fail, badfic:in this world and the next, priorities be damned, mary sue and gary stu, hermione in name only, ineffectual villainy, harry potter, convention of the psychics, idiot balls for everyone, dumbledore is evil, continuity isn't optional
szaleniec1000 Sep 04, 2011 14:36
show don't tell, please form an orderly queue, expospeak, the nudist doth protest too much, reading the books is a good idea, pov!fail, welsh railway, hogwarts school of oratory, are you a witch or not, harry is an idiot, fucking self-awareness how does it work, priorities be damned, mary sue and gary stu, have i mentioned i hate this fic, convention of the psychics, breast fixation, epic fail, badfic:hogwarts exposed, brave sir harry ran away, wrong word dammit, onion slicing convention, a description would be nice, department of redundancy department, too much information, anvil of foreshadowing, mione my arse, nudity for everyone, incantations do not work that way, disembodied dialogue, harry potter, idiot balls for everyone, harry the pervert, literally stupid, continuity isn't optional, it's full of filler